My first Haiku
The moon is so bright
The moon brightens up the street
The moon is beautiful
I am a Year 4 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
What a lovely poem Hunter.Well done.I like looking at the moon,especially when they talk about a solar eclipse or a blood moon.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to reading your next post Hunter.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week Hunter.
ReplyDeleteI hope you have a wonderful last week of school Hunter.All the best :)
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