Saturday, March 27, 2021

The Present



Last year I was playing Call of Duty with my brother and Drew.

I like this game because it involves other team mates.


Then my mum came in and opened the blinds and put a box right in front of me. So I decided to open it up and there was a puppy in it. I noticed that it only had three legs.  I felt disgusted so I threw it on the floor. When it was upside down it saw a red ball and flipped upright then ran into the cupboard.

 Then he ran under and got the ball and he was having so much fun and I started to feel happy so I decided that I had to go and play fetch with him.

I think I got that puppy because I had one leg missing and he did too.

                             THE END



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2 comments:

  1. Jane CliffordMarch 27, 2021 at 12:59 PM

    Really great recount Hunter. You have made your writing very interesting for the reader. Nice ideas and language. Ka pai!

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  2. Mrs CassidyApril 6, 2021 at 3:44 PM

    Good afternoon Hunter.

    I'm glad that this story had a happy ending.It couldn't of been easy on the puppy but then it couldn't have been easy for the boy either.
    How do you think the puppy lost his leg?.
    We used to have a 3 legged dog when we lived in Clinton.Children teased him lots and called him names.

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