My Hook

On your mark, get set, BANG! I start of by jumping over the first hurdles while the other athletes are close behind . I am representing NZ in the underwater Olympics and don't want to let them down by getting bronze I want gold and I'm gonna get it!

My Haunted house writing

One day there were two men, named

Bob & Trever. They liked hunting deer and other wild animals. They lived in an abandoned cabin in the woods.

 One day the two men were out hunting and they came across a haunted house. They went inside to check it out. They noticed a ghost noise so they ran towards the nearest exit. Suddenly the exit was blocked by a big brick wall. They looked at all the exits emerging with brick walls blocking the exits. Then ghosts started emerging out of the walls and they had axes and swords. The ghosts started swopping towards the men and when the ghosts were close enough to the men the ghosts attacked, but the men weren't going to allow it. So they fought back. The men had ghost catching nets and they got them out of the safari suit pockets and caught the ghosts with the nets and took the ghosts to the ghost busters. THE END.